1. This is great, I live in the ‘all seeing eye’ pov and avoid the 3rd person, but sometimes miss the intimacy it offers. I know the Australian author John Marsden used it well in his Tomorrow when the War Began series to convey the strong emotions of his lead character. But sometimes resorted to clumsy. “I later heard from…” to fill in gaps.

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